Attention must be paid to the effect of the actual wording of the Commentary if the wording is drastic, local courts might ignore the changes.

That provision reflected article 17 on responsibility of States, with the relevant drafting changes.

That provision corresponded to article 18 on responsibility of States, with the relevant drafting changes.

Drafting changes made since that date have been included in the present document and will be reflected in the provisional agenda, which will be issued on 22 July 1994 (A 49 150).

102. Paragraph 3 was supported by certain delegations, subject to some drafting changes, but was found unnecessary by others, who suggested that it be deleted.

62. Mr. RYSINSKI (Poland), Vice Chairman, drew attention to several drafting changes which had been made to paragraph 1 during the informal consultations.

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The precise wording of such an amendment could be left to the drafting group.

This statement and this statement I just wrote are equivalent.

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The Commission adopted subparagraph (a) and referred the matter of its precise formulation to the drafting group.

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1. The formulation process

(a) Drafting process

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The drafting group prepares an internal proposal and circulates it within the drafting group for comments.

The drafting group prepares an internal proposal and circulates it within the group for comment.

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Ratu Manasa Seniloli (Fiji) was appointed Chairman of the Drafting Committee. The Drafting Committee was open ended.

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The Drafting Committee shall elect its own Chairman.

That wording is bad.

That's very nicely put.

In addition, the consolidated text incorporates some minor drafting changes, of a technical nature, suggested by the Editorial Control Section of the Secretariat of the United Nations, in order to align the instrument with previously adopted conventions.

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Others pointed out that the drafting was overly complicated.

It does not alter the substance proposed in the second report.

So it is a somewhat confusing formulation.