Syntax

Workers Paradise?

Miserable and lonely.

The precise wording of such an amendment could be left to the drafting group.

This statement and this statement I just wrote are equivalent.

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Worse Than

Drafting Group

In high empyrean

In a lofty Garden

in a lofty Garden ,

In a Garden lofty .

In a lofty Paradise ,

In a lofty Garden .

in a lofty Garden

In a high garden

in an elevated garden ,

in a high Garden ,

In an elevated garden ,

in an exalted garden

In a lofty garden ,

in a lofty garden ,

In a Garden on high ,

I'd make it into paradise, indeed

In the Garden of Eden.

The Commission adopted subparagraph (a) and referred the matter of its precise formulation to the drafting group.

E. Secretariat

Drafting suggestions

1. The formulation process

(a) Drafting process

C. Report of the drafting group . 90 96 20

Where was the Garden of Eden?

There's no Hell anyway, and no Heaven.

The drafting group prepares an internal proposal and circulates it within the drafting group for comments.

The drafting group prepares an internal proposal and circulates it within the group for comment.

Ratu Manasa Seniloli (Fiji) was appointed Chairman of the Drafting Committee. The Drafting Committee was open ended.

Paraphrase Training

C. Report of the drafting group

Communications drafting training

The Drafting Committee shall elect its own Chairman.

That wording is bad.

That's very nicely put.

Verily the pious will be in heaven ,

In the high empyrean ,

Indeed the virtuous are in serenity .